Changes: Something Sweet to Bite

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Something Sweet to Bite, is the first story in Something Sweet to Bite saga, written by Knackerman. It was published on October 2nd, 2012. On October 3rd, 2014, a reading of the story was posted on YouTube, by Emogakva.

Plot

On the night before Nightmare Night, Applejack was busy, making caramel apples with her sister. While searching around the farm, Applejack comes across her sister who had been murdered, before she is also attacked and killed by some monster, with the voice of a child.

In a flashback, Taking place years ago, An earth pony filly who's curious about unicorns, so her father decides to take her into to town show her the unicorn he works for, who owns a candy shop.

A week before Nightmare Night, all of Ponyville's children were busy helping Pinkie Pie, decorating Ponyville. Among them were Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, who got into an argument with Apple Bloom and her two friends, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle, about the Nightmare Night tradition of leaving candy for Nightmare Moon. After finding out that Diamond and Silver never left any candy for Luna last year, they end up making a bet on who can get more candy on Nightmare Night. Pinkie Pie tries to get the five to cancel their bet saying how important it is to leave candy for Princess Luna and later, while decorating Golden Oaks Library, shows them an old book, called "Ye Olde Tricks n Treats", that contain several Nigtmare Night stories and several recipes for different types of candy treats. However the book is torn in half, due to Pinkie and Twilight fighting over it, causing several pages containg candy recepies to fall out. Thinking that Diamond and Silver are going to cheat, Sweetie Belle steals the recipes and convince the rest of her friends to make their own candy so they can win the bet

In a another flashback, it shows the father again, this time showing his daughter the town, and the store he delivers to, the owner, who took over the shop after his grandmother passed away, proceeds to feed the filly sweets, which are revealed to have been drugged and knocking her out, before the shop owner proceeds to kill the filly's father with several knives.

On the night of Nightmare Night, Fluttershy is shown hiding inside her home. When she starts hearing knocking at her door, she goes to investigate, only to find no one at the door. Suddenly she heard her bunny, Angel let out a scream, as she tried to comfort he, Angel jumped up and bit her hard, before running upstairs. She started hearing a knock again, but this time when she answered she saw a bunch of lit pumpkins in her front yard,

The Candy Mare
Twilight Sparkle
Pinkie Pie
Sweetie Belle
Scootaloo
Apple Bloom
Applejack
Rarity
Princess Luna
Lemon Drop
Fluttershy
Diamond Tiara
Silver Spoon
Mayor Mare
Pumpkin Patch's father

Trivia

The inspiration for this story, said by author himself, was witnessing his skin rot, after contracting MRSA, from a spider bite.
Another inspiration for the story, was several old horror movies, including Trick R Treat, The Texas Chainsaw Massacre and Killer Klowns from Outer Space.
This is the shortest story in the series, with only having six chapters.

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 == Plot ==
-On the night before Nightmare Night, [[Applejack]] was busy, making caramel apples with her sister. While searching around the farm, Applejack comes across her sister who had been murdered, before she is also attacked and killed by some monster, with voice of a child.
+On the night before Nightmare Night, [[Applejack]] was busy, making caramel apples with her sister. While searching around the farm, Applejack comes across her sister who had been murdered, before she is also attacked and killed by some monster, with the voice of a child.
-In a flashback, Taking place years ago, it an earth pony filly who's curious about unicorns, so her father decides to take her into to town show her the unicorn he works for, who owns a candy shop.
+In a flashback, Taking place years ago, An earth pony filly who's curious about unicorns, so her father decides to take her into to town show her the unicorn he works for, who owns a candy shop.
 A week before Nightmare Night, all of Ponyville's children were busy helping Pinkie Pie, decorating Ponyville. Among them were Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, who got into an argument with [[Apple Bloom]] and her two friends, [[Scootaloo]] and [[Sweetie Belle]], about the Nightmare Night tradition of leaving candy for Nightmare Moon. After finding out that Diamond and Silver never left any candy for Luna last year, they end up making a bet on who can get more candy on Nightmare Night. Pinkie Pie tries to get the five to cancel their bet saying how important it is to leave candy for Princess Luna and later, while decorating Golden Oaks Library, shows them an old book, called "Ye Olde Tricks n Treats", that contain several Nigtmare Night stories and several recipes for different types of candy treats. However the book is torn in half, due to Pinkie  and Twilight fighting over it, causing several pages containg candy recepies to fall out. Thinking that Diamond and Silver are going to cheat, Sweetie Belle steals the recipes and convince the rest of her friends to make their own candy so they can win the bet
+In a another flashback, it shows the father again, this time showing his daughter the town, and the store he delivers to, the owner, who took over the shop after his grandmother passed away, proceeds to feed the filly sweets, which are revealed to have been drugged and knocking her out, before the shop owner proceeds to kill the filly's father with several knives.
-In a another flashback
+On the night of Nightmare Night, [[Fluttershy]] is shown hiding inside her home. When she starts hearing knocking at her door, she goes to investigate, only to find no one at the door. Suddenly she heard her bunny, Angel let out a scream, as she tried to comfort he, Angel jumped up and bit her hard, before running upstairs. She started hearing a knock again, but this time when she answered she saw a bunch of lit pumpkins in her front yard,
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